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Rewrite needed Edit

I've already rewritten a badly-written sentence, and removed the "Trivia" section as the latter added nothing that hadn't already been said in the article.

However, there still remains this sentence:

The armoured bears are often in a struggle between keeping their animal customs separate from human interaction.

I don't know what this is supposed to mean, or I would have rewritten it to be more grammatical. "Between their customs" and what other factor, precisely? As written, this sentence doesn't make sense.

I suspect that other parts of this article may also need a rewrite. — RobertATfm (talk) 00:21, February 22, 2013 (UTC)

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